Natural Born
David Antrobus Posted on Friday, October 3, 2014 at 9:04PM 
So once again, I contributed to (and contaminated) Mader's Friday festival of felicitous flash fiction, which is well worth your time either as reader or writer (or both, of course), but the piece I wrote seemed to want to grow into something a little beyond their parameters (as lax and liberal as they are). Mindful that I didn't distract or syphon readers away from there, I asked politely if I could extend it on my own blog, to which I received the equivalent of "shut the fuck up, and if you don't, we'll cut you." So here is a fuller version. Yet it still isn't finished, and if I had the time I'd consider this the beginning of a beautiful friendship, a novella or even novel featuring this dubiously lovable and murderous duo.
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He was a three hundred and fifty pound trucker from Telluride and she was an amputee from a mining town in British Columbia with a penchant for black metal, NASCAR, and munchkin cats. Both were tattooed in deep homage to monarch butterflies and graphic car wreck fetishism respectively. They would ride the interstates in their big rig (technically his, but mi casa es tu casa) listening to homemade audiobooks they'd record at all-night truck stops—Faulkner, Steinbeck, Kerouac, Welty—his suppressed-rage basso profundo and her scratchy bourbon-and-Camel-lite burr unexpectedly complementary and at times wild-electric sunset accessories.
Sometimes they would bicker over music (he loved sixties girl groups the best), so if you were both privileged and star-crossed enough to have been riding along, you might have heard the Ronettes followed by Darkthrone, the authentically murderous might of Mayhem preceding the estrogen-drenched exuberance of Martha and the Vandellas, punctuated by a firecracker string of choice insults hurled with the briefest of smiles. Joy and savagery. Love and nihilism.
In many ways, they were the perfect couple. Connoisseurs of chaos, arbiters of havoc.
She lost her right leg to a dirt bike accident in her teens. Not her entire leg; she still had six or seven inches of femur wormily rounded to a scar-tissue knoll, not entirely dissimilar to a reduced corn dog. Sometimes, while he drove and she allowed herself to be splayed naked beside him, she would let him massage its truncated end and try to imagine it was a gargantuan penis throbbing with some indecipherable need.
And sometimes, with their victims, it would become a weapon.
His girth, allied with and likely the result of the largely sedentary lifestyle and trans-fat-and-white-sugar diet of a long-distance truck driver, was a slow death sentence, and he knew it. All the more reason to satisfy appetites in the here and now. Never defer certain specific pleasures. It became a principal tenet of their peculiar faith.
They were a cult of two, dealing almost exclusively in warped love, dark loyalty, arch skepticism, and wanton homicide.
"Baby, how long till we eat?" she asked, her pinkie lost inside her ear in a forlorn attempt to kill a maddening itch, black-painted nail scoring the drum.
Their regimen was strict, she knew, yet still she asked.
"A little more than two hours, my love."
"Aw. Fu-uck." She could bestow precisely as many syllables on the word fuck as she desired.
"Easy on the cussing, my sweetest Jezebel."
This elicited a crooked smile and a raised eyebrow. Conflicted, seductive, tentative.
"Sorry. You know how I get when my gut thinks my throat's cut."
"You could always gnaw on James."
Oddly, she'd forgotten about James, the last hitchhiker whose doomed trajectory had intersected with their own grisly arc. He'd been a fighter and had nearly gotten away. Which happened far too often.
She explained it thusly: "We're natural born lovers, honey. The killing part don't come natural, just something we tacked on later."
Reader Comments (4)
Yikes - did not see that coming. You do have a way with words and a twist.
Thanks, Yvonne! Not a pleasant little tale, this, but fun to write.
This is a brilliant piece. A writer's piece. Because anyone who deals in words knows that this deceptively straightforward little tale is a finely crafted bit of genius. I love it. And this line: She could bestow precisely as many syllables on the word fuck as she desired. is a perfect example. Simple, but perfect. Excellent piece, brother. R&B
Hey, means a lot coming from you. But yeah, the tough part, when creating an actual story in so few words, is avoiding weighing it down with backstory and exposition. Here, I deliberately showed my hand upfront and tried to make the backstory interesting at least, as it had to be there by necessity (in a longer piece you can "seed" it more naturally). Plus, I forced myself into having to employ that outmoded omniscient perspective, which is easier to sustain in shorter pieces (would be tough in a whole novel). That said, wish I had time as this one has potential.
Again, thanks for commenting, bro. Appreciate it.